Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is my adjectives.

I need to improve on spelling.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

The zebra safely walked along the road until he saw the  strange looking van. One long necked giraffe stuck his neck out of the window to get some air. In animal town I'm a  beautiful blue bird with sparkly rainbow wings in the high trees. Now, I need to get a ruby for my friend, the lion. Off I go down there. Whoosh! Got it. Now to the lion. Whoosh!

My best friend is the king of the jungle.

From Summer!